Wednesday, February 16, 2011

1-26-11-desciptive writing- steve castellon

As you approach Ms. Castellon's lovely home you notice two huge pitbulls. Not only are they big but, they seem like very territoriaol dogs. You hear their loud deep bark towards you. As you go up the red stair case you will notice a blue punching bag. The smell of refried beans and overcooked tortillas escapes through the metal screen door. Ms. Castellons loud strict voice thunders with superiority. You walk in and its clean. Old family pictures hang on the white wall

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